Hah, I knew I'd forgotten something! I wanted to include a rec for that fic in my post ;-)

She's also written other amazing LPW fic!

I think the crack in her armour is even earlier? When she realises she doesn't want Peter shot dead by some gunmen, or lose him for her own better comfort after the nasty letter he sees?

During all these scenes when they negotiate the relationship, part of me wants to smash their heads together and yell 'KISS ALREADY' and the other half is like 'd'awwwwww'